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Second Person, Not First
SHOULD
SHOULD: Address the reader as "you" and avoid "we"/"I" in product copy — "your build failed", not "we were unable to complete the build".
Address the reader as "you" and avoid "we" or "I" in product copy
Bad
Good
Why it matters
First-person copy quietly recenters the interface on the company instead of the person trying to finish a task. Second person keeps the subject on the reader — your build, your key, your next step — and usually shortens the sentence, since "we were unable to complete the build" collapses to "your build failed".