Say What the Product Does
NEVER: Ship generic SaaS phrasing — "streamline your", "empower your", "supercharge", "unleash the power", "best-in-class", "industry-leading", "world-class", "enterprise-grade", "next-generation", "cutting-edge", "seamless experience", "harness the power" (~30 blocked phrases, any single hit fires). If the sentence would fit a CRM, a CDN, and a coffee machine equally well, replace it with a specific verb and noun. Same for 3 or more manufactured-contrast lines ("Not a feature. A platform.").
Replace generic SaaS phrases with a specific verb and noun from the actual product
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Why it matters
impeccable ships a literal blocklist of roughly 30 phrases and fires on any single hit: "streamline your", "empower your", "supercharge your", "unleash the power", "best-in-class", "industry-leading", "world-class", "enterprise-grade", "next-generation", "cutting-edge", "transform your business", "revolutionize", "game-changer", "mission-critical", "future-proof", "seamless experience", "seamlessly integrate", "harness the power", "trusted by leading", "built for the modern".
The test is interchangeability: if the sentence would fit a CRM, a CDN, and a coffee machine equally well, it says nothing. A companion detector, aphoristic-cadence, fires at 3 or more manufactured-contrast constructions ("Not a feature. A platform.").